tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post113845410914400455..comments2023-10-28T06:24:47.456-04:00Comments on Song of a Reformed Headhunter: The Connoisseur Inspects the BoysJee Leonghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01979179110231643931noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post-1138483739865879262006-01-28T16:28:00.000-05:002006-01-28T16:28:00.000-05:00Pretty wicked stuff.I think it might be better for...Pretty wicked stuff.<BR/><BR/>I think it might be better for all of the similes of the boys to be of riding animals, rather than beginning with flowers as you did.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the poem.<BR/><BR/>LarryLarryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13384528388062112189noreply@blogger.com