tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post113983029518356828..comments2023-10-28T06:24:47.456-04:00Comments on Song of a Reformed Headhunter: To Philip Larkin Who SaidJee Leonghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01979179110231643931noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post-1140233619374183472006-02-17T22:33:00.000-05:002006-02-17T22:33:00.000-05:00Thanks, Rob, for telling me about the Larkin recor...Thanks, Rob, for telling me about the Larkin recordings. I will certainly check them out. I have been dipping again into Andrew Motion's Larkin biography in the last couple of days and remembering what a conflict of a man he was. <BR/><BR/>Jee LeongJee Leonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01979179110231643931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post-1140081397364576152006-02-16T04:16:00.000-05:002006-02-16T04:16:00.000-05:00JeeDid you know about the discovery of lost Larkin...Jee<BR/><BR/>Did you know about the discovery of lost Larkin recordings a couple of days ago.<BR/><BR/>At this BBc link:<BR/><BR/>http://newssearch.bbc.co.uk/cgi-bin/search/results.pl?scope=newsukfs&tab=news&q=Philip+Larkin&go.x=21&go.y=12<BR/><BR/>you can click on the audio link on the right-hand side to hear all about it.<BR/><BR/>I agree that this poem, while well written, isn't quite hitting the heights and depths your best work does.Robhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17046788730174617923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post-1140053432369528162006-02-15T20:30:00.000-05:002006-02-15T20:30:00.000-05:00Hi Aruna and Larry,great to see you around. I am c...Hi Aruna and Larry,<BR/><BR/>great to see you around. I am certainly going to think further about the syntax and the dog metaphor in the octave. The tinkling did not sort out the kinks, or perhaps it is insufficiently kinky. Or something. Thanks! <BR/><BR/>Jee LeongJee Leonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01979179110231643931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post-1139950670492833732006-02-14T15:57:00.000-05:002006-02-14T15:57:00.000-05:00Nice stretch of poems, Jee. Straight Boy is very f...Nice stretch of poems, Jee. Straight Boy is very funny. Grand Historian looks like an important poem to me; you do excellent work when you take on those ancient chinese voices. I love the first couplet in Philip Larkin, but I felt that you restricted yourself with the dog metaphors, and that it would have developed into a better poem without that effort at strict unity.<BR/><BR/>Thanks,<BR/>LarryLarryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13384528388062112189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post-1139833118343001322006-02-13T07:18:00.000-05:002006-02-13T07:18:00.000-05:00Oh, interesting revision. I remember seeing this o...Oh, interesting revision. I remember seeing this on PFFA and enjoying it very much. The new specificity of the "dogs" images in S1 is nice, but I'm not sure about the changes in phrasing in L1-4: I think I liked it better as one, running sentence. It sounded more Larkinish to me that way. I still think the "take/root" image (and linebreak) is fantastic: it crystallises the whole poem, all the ideas of deprivation and death and beauty, the daffodils and the "bone" in the flower beds. Plus working really well as an image in itself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com