tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post114229256277640432..comments2023-10-28T06:24:47.456-04:00Comments on Song of a Reformed Headhunter: Payday Loans (1 of 31)Jee Leonghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01979179110231643931noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post-1142508535225598012006-03-16T06:28:00.000-05:002006-03-16T06:28:00.000-05:00Hiya Rob,thanks for reading and leaving a comment....Hiya Rob,<BR/>thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Way to go for NaPosomething...<BR/><BR/>Jee LeongJee Leonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01979179110231643931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19954746.post-1142325966175925892006-03-14T03:46:00.000-05:002006-03-14T03:46:00.000-05:00I like the last four lines (excellent close) and t...I like the last four lines (excellent close) and the first four. In between I wasn't so sure, especially the "heart twitters in reply" section - are you saying that the heart resigns to the reality that countries will prefer the way they've usually done things? The syntax seems a bit strange, and twitters seems an odd choice.<BR/>Or maybe it's early and I'm not yet awake enough to crit a poem.Robhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17046788730174617923noreply@blogger.com