Two more ghazals published, this time in Glass. The editors asked for the deletion of a weak couplet from "In the cloister, in the Temple of the Sacred Fountain," and I obliged. It's a ghazal, isn't it, and so the couplets are more or less autonomous. I am not sure if I agree with their judgement but I have time to think and reinstate or revise the couplet for the book.
Happy New Year!