a poet's journal: notes, drafts and reactions
Hi Jee,It's an enormously appealing series. If there's any room for suggestions, I think it works best where you give the most attention to meter, like in A and V. It's still intriguing but less mesmerizing where you seem to lose concern with the tetrametric infrastructure.
Hi Larry,Good to hear from you again. I hope you are very well. I agree with your suggestion. Will be thinking about that when I revise.
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