a poet's journal: notes, drafts and reactions
Such precision, Jee. I hope that I will be able to make the virtual party. And "the harder to hear the drop/ of ardor in the mountain air." That is a finely weighted line. The mutation of the "r" sound carries a trembling. Reminds me of Bunting reading Pound's "Sextus Propertius" and drawing out an elegiac tremor through the "r" sound. An intaglio of a poem.
Thanks, Andrew. The next one is done in relief.
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